Avalanche Advice #AtoZChallenge
“Damnit, Adrian!” Alden was pissed off. He wanted to punch something but the only thing within reach was Adrian. “I’m sick of your “relationship advice” because you’re wrong!” Alden hated being mad at his best friend but he couldn’t help it.
Adrian crossed his arms over his firm chest. “Well maybe you just suck at relationships!” He shouted back.
Alden’s arm flexed with the need to punch Adrian in his smug face. “I’ve done pretty well with this one.” Alden motioned between the two of them. He was just so… Just so… Damnit! Alden walked away with his hands on his hips and stopped some feet away. “Do you intentionally give bad advice?”
“Yes.”
Alden whirled around his mouth gaping open. “Why the hell would you do that?!” He strode up to Adrian right in his face. “Do you enjoy watching me squirm?!” His face was a mere inch from Adrian’s, spit flying. He was so hot with rage he knew he was as red as a cherry.
Adrian’s eyes held fire and for a moment Alden was scared Adrian would actually hit him. “Because!” Adrian shoved him away. “You dipshit, I love you, you asshole!” His chest was heaving and he looked scared as hell. Adrian’s cheeks colored and he turned around, running off.
Alden stood stunned. Adrian what? When? How long? He- What? Well shit.
Posted on Tuesday, April 1st, 2014, in #atozchallenge, Blog Hop, Free Read, M/M, Writing and tagged #2014. Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.
Whew, tense! Great writing!
Happy A-Zing!
Elsie
AJ’s wHooligan in the A-Z Challenge
Thank you! I’ve learned over the A to Z years!
YAY Lor’s A-Z ficlets are back! I has an excite. Try not to get too many novels out of the challenge this year, dear. XD
Uhhhh.. Only one has really screamed at me this year but I could ignore it and put it at the very bottom of the list. I’m more worried about Vic getting ideas.
Uhoh. XD
Hehe, the last paragraph. Like that speechlessness.
I know right? Was totally feeling the character on that one.
Aw Adrian. Love the totally stunned moments like that 🙂
Happy A to Z-ing!
~Anna
My A to Z.
Oh, he was stunned all right!
Interesting! Great writing!